BW-301a · Module 2

The Close — How to End a Proposal

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The last page of a proposal is the most neglected page in the document. Most proposals end with a price table, a contact line, and a trailing silence that leaves the reader unclear on what happens next. The close should do one thing: make the next step so obvious that the reader feels slightly embarrassed not to take it.

This is not aggression. It is consideration. The reader has spent time evaluating your proposal. They deserve to know exactly what you expect them to do if they agree.

  1. Name the Decision State explicitly what you are asking the client to decide. Not "please let us know your thoughts" — that is a request for feedback, not a close. "We are asking you to authorize Phase 1 of this engagement, beginning the week of [date], with a signed agreement and initial deposit by [date]." The client should never have to infer what saying yes means.
  2. Define the Immediate Next Step The close should specify one next step, not a menu of options. "To move forward, sign the attached agreement and return it with the deposit referenced on page 8. We will schedule the kickoff call within 48 hours of receipt." One step. One action. The moment you give the client three options, you have turned a close into a committee meeting.
  3. Create Appropriate Urgency If there is a genuine constraint — a project start date, a team availability window, a pricing guarantee period — state it clearly. This is not artificial urgency. It is honest disclosure of a real constraint. "This pricing is held through [date], after which the Phase 2 resource allocation will be committed to another engagement." If the constraint is real, stating it is courtesy. If it is not real, do not invent one — it reads as pressure and undermines trust.

Do This

  • "To authorize this engagement, please sign the agreement on page 12 and return it by [date]."
  • Name one specific next step that requires exactly one action from the client
  • Include a valid-through date tied to a real constraint
  • End with your direct contact information alongside the next step, not buried in a footer

Avoid This

  • "We look forward to hearing your thoughts and welcome any questions."
  • End with the price table and nothing after it
  • List three different paths forward ("you could authorize Phase 1, or Phase 1 and 2, or we could schedule a call...")
  • Invent urgency that does not exist — "limited availability" when your calendar is open